The first chapter of my My Little Pony alternate history fan fic, The Son of the Emperor. Taken from the Equestria Daily description:
"We all know about stories where Humans enter Equestria. But what about a world where Equestria is in the Human world? It is the year 1820, and a series of events brings a young unicorn and a human prince together. Together, they will embark on a quest to change Europe, and the world, forever."
Any comments or criticisms are welcomed (So long as you aren't a dick at least).
Chapter 2: [link]